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  • How To Write The Perfect Comparative Essay On Poetry

Poetry comparison – How to write the perfect comparative essay

Students writing poetry comparison essays in classroom

When it comes to poetry analysis, Phil Beadle knows what examiners want to see – and he’s here to make sure you can help every student can deliver it

Phil Beadle

Poetry comparison – or writing a comparative essay about two poems, seen or unseen – is what students will eventually be assessed on when they come to sit the poetry analysis part of their English Literature GCSE .

It makes sense, therefore, to get some early poetry comparison practice in. See what the assessment criteria will be asking for in preparation for the day the stakes are high.

The first door we must knock on is the one housing the crone of context. What the GCSE mark schemes will eventually ask for is a well constructed, conceptual response replete with oodles of subject terminology and a fairly deep mention of context.

It asks students to do this, however, in very little time. It also ignores the fact that contextual analysis in poetry – aside from the obvious modern/ancient dichotomy – is a rich brew that requires, firstly, a lot of contextual knowledge.

Also ignored is the fact that the biographical takes you away from the textual. Since the value in poetry analysis is the study of how words and form align to construct beauty or its antithesis, mention of context inevitably takes you into the realms of history. This is a whole other subject.

Poetry comparison example

Resources: ‘My Last Duchess’, by Robert Browning ‘Remains’, by Simon Armitage

Context – theme

So, my recommendation to students when constructing the first paragraph of a poetry comparison essay is, if appropriate, to make glancing reference to the titles. Only go so far as linking these to comparison of theme. The contextual is in the thematic.

On comparing theme, they should make explicit reference to the word ‘subtextual’. This flags to the examiner that this is an answer rich in apposite use of subject terminology quite early on. For example:

“The subtextual theme of ‘My Last Duchess’ is that sexual jealousy can cause the empowered (in this case titled) men – or, indeed, just men – to so lose their minds. They become murderous. Whereas the subtextual theme of ‘Remains’ links to the ambiguities of the title.

“As a noun, it links to the idea of the human remains of the looter around which the narrative revolves. As a verb, all that is left is memory.

“Both these poems linger around ideas of memory. Both narrators are tortured. But whereas the narrator in ‘Remains’ realises that he is stained by his actions, the narrator of ‘My Last Duchess’ is oblivious and has learned altogether nothing.”

Structure – rhyme

This is as far as we might want to go with context. Otherwise, we are addressing the poetic with its opposite and scribing a list of dates.

So, the next paragraph should examine structure. We do so by using rhyme scheme and form as a way of unlocking it. First of all, say what you see and, where possible, state the form:

“‘My Last Duchess’ is from Browning’s collection of ‘Dramatic Monologues’. It’s a substantial block of text with one person, the Duke, speaking. ‘Remains’ is seven quatrain stanzas and a couplet.”

Analysis of rhyme scheme

This is simple to do and gives students an opportunity to shovel a bit of subject terminology the examiners’ way. Generally, it is best to leave this unanalysed however. This is because analysis of rhyme scheme is much richer in terms of unlocking structure.

“The rhyme scheme in ‘My Last Duchess’ is in perfect couplets. On the other hand, ‘Remains’ is the epitome of deliberate irregularity.

“If one is to take this as a symbolic suggestion of the degree of order in both dramatic and moral worlds, one might conclude that the world of the former poem is ordered and correct, whereas that of the latter is chaotic and incongruent.

“There is an irony in the Duke speaking in perfect rhyme, being able to rhyme “munificence” and “pretence” and then suggesting he has no “Skill in speech”. This suggests him to be the liar he is.

“But the more interesting approach is in ‘Remains’: three out of four of the end words in stanza one, in which the looters raid the bank, are repeated in stanza six, when the incident is replayed in the narrator’s memory.

“The fact that only three of the four words -“out”, “bank”, “not” – are repeated suggests the decay of memory. Internal rhyme also plays a part in the pivot between action turning into memory. The fourth stanza features eye rhymes ”agony”, “by”, “body” before going into near perfect rhyme that carries on into the next stanza, “lorry”, “really”.

“But “really” is an add on, a coda to the phrase “End of story”. It suggests that the death of the looter should have been the finish of the event, but that there is an unpleasant coda. This is the fact that memory ‘remains’.”

You can get a lot from a poem through examining the rhyme in detail.

Metre – stress

From there, we go onto a fairly stunted form of metrical analysis; and we do this precisely because others avoid it.

I am not suggesting that students attempt analysis of trochees and anapests. After all, to our modern untrained ears, the differences between stressed and unstressed syllables can be unfathomable.

But where there is obvious metric change, we take this as a signal from the poet to pay special attention to this line (and to analyse it).

“ Metrically, ‘My Last Duchess’ appears to be in tetrameter with the odd substitution, “I call”. This, again, might be taken to suggest the narrator’s level of control over his circumstances.

“ The metre in ‘Remains’ is used to create specific effects. It is broadly irregular except in stanzas one, three and six (even, event, recall) where it goes into tetrameter.

“ The substitutions on “Sleep” and “Dream”, however, give a jarring effect, an elongated stutter, a metric pause. This sets up the brief moment of peace before the nightmare of replayed events comes back to haunt him.”

Language – reflections

We do not go over the top with metrical analysis. Just one comparison is enough to let the examiner know we are on top of the brief.

“We do not go over the top with metrical analysis”

From there, we divert into the linguistic. Show the examiner that you can recognise the idea that the soundtrack of the poem is somehow a representation or mirror of the poem’s themes. One killer comparison is all we need:

“Ultimately, the distinction is between a narrator rich in self delusion and one haunted by self knowledge. Both are murderers, but one has no guilt over an action he considered before committing. The other took a rapid action that now haunts him.

“The difference in consideration is signalled by the punctuation. There is a difference between the time implied by the commas in “probably armed, possibly not” and the semi colons in “This grew; I gave commands; then all smiles stopped together”.

“It tells us much about their comparative level of ruthlessness and design at the moment of decision. There is also a distinction in maturity that is signalled by the howling childishness of the ‘oo’ sounds in “forsooth”, “choose” and “stoop” and the deadening emotional stutter of pain in the repetitive ‘n’ sounds in the penultimate line of ‘Remains’.”

And as for conclusions for your comparisons in poetry essay, don’t bother. We haven’t got the time, and they are always rubbish anyway.

Phil Beadle is a teacher and the author of several books. This includes Rules for Mavericks: A Manifesto for dissident creatives (Crown House). Check out our AQA English Literature Paper 1 revision resource .

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How to compare poems – 5 steps

Previously, I wrote a post on how to analyse any unseen poem , which a lot of you found useful. One of you asked if I could also write a guide on how to compare poems, so that’s what this post is for. 

What’s the deal with comparative analysis – and why does it always seem so much harder…? 

Between an unseen single-poem analysis task and a prepared comparative poetry analysis task, which one would you prefer?

Both can be tricky to master, but neither is unmanageable – we just need to find the right strategy. 

Personally, I think the reason that comparative tasks seem more challenging is largely psychological. It’s not so much that the act of comparing texts itself is hard as it is that we get easily flustered when asked to multitask – especially in a high-stress situation like an exam.

Obviously, if these are set texts that you can prepare for, that should relieve a lot of the stress which would otherwise come with tackling an unseen comparative task (with the right sort of guidance, granted). 

So, what’s my point here?

I’m trying to say if you find comparative tasks intimidating, don’t – because

a) there’s a systematic way to go about doing it well, and

b) I’m going to show you just how to do it in this post, complete with steps and examples. 

5 steps to comparing any poems: a guide

Step 1: summarise the main idea of each poem in 1-2 sentences , step 2: find similarities – thematic, stylistic, structural and formal, step 3: find differences from similarities , step 4: identify 3 key ideas for comparison, step 5: summarise your main argument in a comparative statement.

Or watch my video below, in which I go through the 5 steps to comparing poems (but stick around this blog post for a demonstration of how to do it in the next section, where I compare Carol Rumens and Seamus Heaney’s poems):

What’s the first thing we do when encountering any poem? We read it, of course. But what do you do after you first read the poem? We’re likely to re-read it – either because we don’t really ‘get it’ the first time round, or because we need to start sourcing clues for our analysis. 

Re-reading is all good and well (not to mention necessary), but the problem with it is there’s potentially no end to how many times we could re-read a poem, and so the more we re-read, the more we’re likely to be led into a labyrinthe of questions, which causes more confusion. In normal, non-exam circumstances, that’s perfectly fine, but if you’re racing against time, then a better tactic is to read once, then summarise your first impressions; read twice, and summarise the main idea of the poem. 

But, what if I really don’t get it? Obviously, there’s room to take ‘once’ or ‘twice’ liberally, so no issues if you have to re-read a couple of times before you can summarise anything. My point, however, is not to get sucked into an endless process of reading and re-reading, because before long you’ll have whittled all your time away – only to have nothing to show for it at the end. 

To prevent this, start actively engaging with the poem by asking yourself these questions immediately after reading it: 

What is the main gist of the poem’s content?

How do I feel after reading this poem? 

What are some themes or ideas that jump out at me? 

Is there anything special or weird about this poem? 

Etcetera. 

Then, scribble them down on your planning sheet (you should always plan before you write!), so at least you’re visualizing your response to the poem, which gives you a much better place to start than simply keeping everything in an abstract, befuddled jumble in your head. These notes don’t have to be long – just 1-2 sentences or even bullet points will suffice. 

how to compare poems summarise the main idea of each poem in one to two sentences

Once we’ve settled on a main understanding of the poems, it’s time to switch our thinking to a ‘lateral’ mode. By ‘lateral’, I mean to think across both poems in terms of different aspects of analysis (i.e. theme, style, structure, form), instead of focusing on only one poem at a time. 

Let’s start by looking at the similarities in theme, style, structure and form between the poems. If you’ve read my post on ‘how to tackle any unseen poetry’ (which you should!), you’ll know I love me some tables, rows and columns, so here’s a sample table for us to systematise our observations:

Similarities between Poem A and Poem B

Both poems are about
Examples from each poem[Insert quotations about love from Poem A][Insert quotations about love from Poem B]
Both poems feature
Examples from each poem[Insert quotations that contain comparative devices from Poem A][Insert quotations that contain comparative devices from Poem B]
Both poems are comprised of (5-line stanzas)Both poems adopt a specific  
Examples from each poem[State the number of cinquains and the type of rhyme scheme in Poem A – note that the rhyme schemes of A and B don’t necessarily have to be the same] [State the number of cinquains and the type of rhyme scheme in Poem B]
Both poems are / lyric poems 
Examples from each poem[State how Poem A embodies the traits of an ode, e.g. how the poem moves across the three parts of strophe, antistrophe, and epode][State how Poem B embodies the traits of an ode] 

Again, as I’ve mentioned in the unseen post, the ability to spot these similarities (and differences, as we’ll cover in the next step) is predicated on us being familiar with the technical basics. I.e., we can’t spot a metaphor if we don’t know what metaphor means, so make sure that you sort out the fundamentals first – a wobbly foundation is no place to start any poetry analysis task, comparative, unseen, or otherwise.

how to compare poems find similarities between the poems thematic stylistic structural and formal

Differences across poems can appear on multiple levels. There can be complete differences (e.g. Poem A is a sonnet whereas Poem B is a ballad), but more often, we’re looking for ‘differences within similarities’. This is why a good place to start identifying differences is, perhaps a bit ironically, in our similarities table. 

The guiding questions to ask, then, would include the following:

How do the poems present the same theme in different ways? 

How do the poets use the same stylistic, structural or formal techniques to present different aspects of the theme? 

For instance, while both poems may be about love, A could be about unrequited love and B about mutual love, so there’s a thematic difference for you. Alternatively, both poems may feature comparative devices, but while metaphors are used to compare love with dandelions in Poem A, similes could be used to compare love with an onion in Poem B.

Likewise, both poems may be odes , but perhaps A is a Pindaric ode, while B is a Horatian ode (for a more detailed explanation of the ode, read this post). So on so forth. You’ll notice that the ‘differences’, then, could simply be your analysis of the different quotations you’ve sourced for each poem’s ‘similarities’. 

So instead of creating a new table, we can add one extra line underneath each aspect of analysis to address how each ‘similarity’ differs across the poems, like this: 

Both poems are about
Examples from each poem[Insert quotations about love from Poem A][Insert quotations about love from Poem B]
Poem A is about unrequited love and the futility of pining after the wrong person; Poem B is about mutual love and the joys of reciprocal affection. 
Both poems feature
Examples from each poem[Insert quotations that contain comparative devices from Poem A][Insert quotations that contain comparative devices from Poem B]
Poem A uses similes to convey…,  whereas B features metaphor to express the idea that… 
Both poems are comprised of (four-line stanzas)Both poems adopt a specific  
Examples from each poem[State the number of quatrains and the type of rhyme scheme in Poem A – note that the rhyme schemes of A and B don’t necessarily have to be the same] [State the number of quatrains and the type of rhyme scheme in Poem B]
Poem A comprises 3 quatrains and follows an alternate rhyme scheme, while Poem B comprises 8 quatrains and features a series of chain rhyme which carries over the rhyme in line 3 of each stanza over to the next stanza. 
Both poems are / lyric poems 
Examples from each poem[State how Poem A embodies the traits of an ode, e.g. how the poem moves across the three parts of strophe, antistrophe, and epode][State how Poem B embodies the traits of an ode] 
Poem A is shaped like a pillar (i.e. is an example of concrete poetry); Poem B is more visually aligned and consistent.

Once we’ve reviewed all the ‘differences-in-similarities’, we can then zoom out and see if there are other fundamental points of divergence between the poems, i.e. is there something in Poem A that’s totally absent from Poem B, and vice versa? If it serves your argument to also bring these points in, then feel free to add them in. 

how to compare poems find differences from the similarities you have identified

Now that we’ve mapped out all the thematic, stylistic, structural and formal similarities and differences, it’s time to zoom in on how the theme is presented from various angles through the use of style, structure and form.

This means going back to the quotations we’ve sourced for the stylistic, structural and formal categories in each table, and looking at how these quotations present the theme in different ways through the poet’s use of techniques.

The purpose of this is to identify 3 main points of discussion for our main body section, which could look something like this:

Main body 1: How the poems present the nature of love (unrequited vs mutual)

  • Techniques used for this: Poem A (metaphor); Poem B (rhyme) 

Main body 2: How the poems present the fickleness of love, regardless of unrequited or mutual affections 

  • Techniques used for this: Poem A (organic imagery); Poem B (irony) 

Main body 3: How the poems reach their respective revelation about the role of love in our lives

  • Techniques used for this: Poem A (indentation / formal variation); Poem B (rhyming couplet at the end)

Together, your 3 main body points should cover the entirety of both texts, and not be limited to just one section of each poem. As for the ‘techniques used’, these should come in organically as part of your analysis, as you explain how the poet(s) convey these ideas through the use of metaphor , rhyme, organic imagery , irony etc. 

One more point to note is this: even within a comparative framework, there’s likely to be an arc of transformation in the way a theme is portrayed in each poem.

So, if Poem A is about unrequited love, does it begin in a despairing tone, but ends on a more stoic note? And if Poem B is about mutual love, is the idea presented in a purely joyful light throughout the poem, or does an element of doubt seep in halfway?

It’s important that we pay attention to these changes within each poem even while comparing across poems. 

how to compare poems identify 3 key ideas for comparison

Finally, let’s summarise the poems’ similarities and differences in a comparative statement.

This should be the guiding thesis for your essay, which also doubles as your main line of argument and cascades into points of analysis for the main body section.

Perhaps it seems a bit odd to ‘work backwards’ by coming up with the introductory thesis at the end of our planning process, but it works, because when you think about it, your argument should be a distillation of your main points, which are the specifics in each main body paragraph. 

To formulate the thesis, use comparative sentence structures like the following:

While both Poem A and Poem B are about…, Poem A portrays… as…, whereas Poem B casts… as… 

Poem A and Poem B are concerned with…, but Poem A presents… in a … light, while Poem B paints… as…

In Poem A, … is depicted as… However, this same subject matter is dealt with differently in Poem B, where the poet portrays… as… 

Your comparative thesis should be thematic in nature (i.e. it spells out how a theme is portrayed across both poems); any shared or different techniques could either be left to the main body analysis, or – if it helps clarify your focus as you go on to write the rest of your essay – you could add one follow-up sentence after the comparative thesis to summarise the technical overlaps and divergences between the poems.

For example, “Poem A relies mainly on comparative devices and imagery, while Poem B features personification and rhyme to convey the nuances of…” etc etc. But this is largely optional. 

how to compare poems summarise your main argument in a comparative statement

Quick demonstration: Carol Rumens’ ‘The Emigree’ vs Seamus Heaney’s ‘Storm on an Island’ | AQA GCSE English Literature Power and Conflict Poetry

Below, I’ll demonstrate how we can apply these steps to a comparison between two GCSE Power and Conflict poems – Carol Rumens’ ‘The Emigree’ and Seamus Heaney’s ‘Storm on an Island’. 

You can refer to the texts here (The Emigree) and here (Storm on an Island).

In ‘Emigree’, the persona is a political exile (hence the title) who has left her home country to escape political persecution. In the poem, she reminisces about her native city with nostalgic fondness, while conveying her awareness of the tyrannical threat that lurks in the shadows of her past. In a nutshell, she misses home but knows that she will probably never be able to return. 

The main idea of ‘Storm in an Island’ is that we’re often afraid of things that aren’t out to get us. We prepare for potential dangers, and yet are unaware that we can’t always prepare for them, or that they usually turn out to not be dangerous at all. In this poem, the persona initially sees nature as a force of threat, but ultimately understands that while nature is forceful, it doesn’t have to be threatening. 

P
Being outside one’s comfort zone
Facing potential danger
Examples from each poemThe persona is an emigree in a foreign country, as she recalls “There once was a country… I left it as a child” (1)The persona is bracing for a potentially devastating storm (“We are prepared: we build our houses squat”) (1) 
War imageryNatural imageryAlliteration
Examples from each poemWar imagery
It may be at war, it may be sick with tyrants, (7)
The white streets of that city, the graceful slopesglow even clearer as time rolls its tanksand the frontiers rise between us, close like waves. (9-11)
And strafes invisibly. Space is a salvo,We are bombarded with the empty air. (17-18)
Natural imagery
“Sunlight-clear” (2)“Sunlight” (8, 16, 25)  (“It tastes of sunlight” is also synaesthesia) “Close like waves” (11)“Nor are there treesWhich might prove company when it blows fullBlast: you know what I mean – leaves and branchesCan raise a tragic chorus in a gale” (5-8) 
References to “the sea… exploding comfortably down on the cliffs”, “the flung spray hits/The very windows” (12-15) 
“We just sit tight while wind dives/And strafes invisibly” (16-17) 
Feature 3Alliteration
Examples from each poem“The worst news I receive of it cannot break
My original view, the bright, filled paperweight.” (5-6)
The white streets of that city, the graceful slopesglow even clearer as time rolls its tanksand the frontiers rise between us, close like waves. (9-11)
I have no passport, there’s no way back at allbut my city comes to me in its own white plane.It lies down in front of me, docile as paper;I comb its hair and love its shining eyes.
Starts with plosives Includes sibilants in moments of recollected tranquility 
We are prepared: we build our houses squat,Sink walls in rock and roof them with good slate. (1-2) 
But there are no trees, no natural shelter.You might think that the sea is company,Exploding comfortably down on the cliffsBut no: when it begins, the flung spray hitsThe very windows, spits like a tame catTurned savage. We just sit tight while wind divesAnd strafes invisibly. (11-17) 

Also starts with plosivesIncludes sibilants to convey surrounding tranquility 
Presence of enjambment / run-on lines 
Examples from each poemLines 1-4 Lines 9-11Lines 7-10
Varied lineation at points, not visually aligned
Examples from each poemWavy curve of the stanzas (especially stanza 2) Waviness of the stanzaic shape becomes more consistent after line 7 (the protruding line) 
Being outside one’s comfort zoneFacing potential danger
Examples from each poemThe persona is an emigree in a foreign country, as she recalls “There once was a country… I left it as a child” (1)The persona is bracing for a potentially devastating storm (“We are prepared: we build our houses squat”) (1) 
The persona is an emigree in political exile – she is geographically displaced from but emotionally attached to her home.The persona is at home (geographically stable), but his anxiety about the storm leaves him psychologically unmoored. 
War imageryNatural imageryAlliteration 
Feature 1 War imagery
Examples from each poemIt may be at war, it may be sick with tyrants, (7)
The white streets of that city, the graceful slopesglow even clearer as time rolls its tanksand the frontiers rise between us, close like waves. (9-11)
And strafes invisibly. Space is a salvo,We are bombarded with the empty air. (17-18)
War is a real occurrence in the persona’s home country, and is implied to be the reason for her exile. Not only are the “tyrants” a source of terror and threat for her, even “time”, which “rolls its tanks”, erects a barrier between her and “her city”, separating them in a brutal way. The war references in this poem are figurative, but also paradoxical. “Strafes” means ‘to attack repeatedly with bombs’, so “strafes invisibly” is technically impossible because bombing is audio-visually prominent. The word “salvo” means “a simultaneous discharge of artillery or other guns in a battle”, which makes the statement “space is a salvo” paradoxical because space has no substance or force. Likewise the reference to “We are bombarded with the empty air”. The idea here is that the persona is imagining (or anticipating) terror and attack where there is none. 
Feature 2Natural imagery
Examples from each poem“Sunlight-clear” (2)“Sunlight” (8, 16, 25)  (“It tastes of sunlight” is also synaesthesia) “Close like waves” (11)“Nor are there treesWhich might prove company when it blows fullBlast: you know what I mean – leaves and branchesCan raise a tragic chorus in a gale” (5-8) 
References to “the sea… exploding comfortably down on the cliffs”, “the flung spray hits/The very windows” (12-15) 
“We just sit tight while wind dives/And strafes invisibly” (16-17) 
There are lots of references to “sunlight” in this poem (which are juxtaposed against references to darkness towards the end). As a disinfectant and a symbol of hope, ‘sunlight’ represents for the persona the power that her fond memories of home hold above all else – and the warmth they bring her despite the cold, terrorising reminder of tyrants and exile. The references to nature – “trees”, “leaves and branches”, “the sea”, “the cliffs”, “wind” – create the impression of a rugged, vast landscape that’s removed from civilisation (hence the title – ‘storm on an island’). There’s the sense the persona is engulfed by these natural structures and elements, which are imbued with agency and power. 
Feature 3Alliteration
Examples from each poem“The worst news I receive of it cannot break
My original view, the bright, filled paperweight.” (5-6)
The white streets of that city, the graceful slopesglow even clearer as time rolls its tanksand the frontiers rise between us, close like waves. (9-11)
I have no passport, there’s no way back at allbut my city comes to me in its own white plane.It lies down in front of me, docile as paper;I comb its hair and love its shining eyes.
Starts with plosives Includes sibilants in moments of recollected tranquility 
We are prepared: we build our houses squat,Sink walls in rock and roof them with good slate. (1-2) 
But there are no trees, no natural shelter.You might think that the sea is company,Exploding comfortably down on the cliffsBut no: when it begins, the flung spray hitsThe very windows, spits like a tame catTurned savage. We just sit tight while wind divesAnd strafes invisibly. (11-17) 

Also starts with plosivesIncludes sibilants to convey surrounding tranquility 
In ‘Emigree’, plosives are featured to express the persona’s emotional burden upon recalling “the worst news” she received about her exile (“it cannot break… the bright, filled paperweight”) While sibilants come in later to outline the persona’s fond memory of “my city” (“white streets of that city, the graceful slopes”), there remains a sense of heaviness towards the end, when she imagines that “it [my city] lies down in front of me, docile as paper”. The plosives “down”, “docile” and “paper” are abrupt, forceful sounds, which jars slightly with the denotation of submission, softness and fragility  in “docile” and “paper”. ‘Storm’ opens with harsh sounds (“prepared”, “build”, “rock”, “roof”) to convey friction and conflict, which extend through the cacophony of words such as “company”, “comfortably” and “cliffs”. But it concludes with a series of sibilants (“spits”, “savage”, “sit”, “strafes invisibly”) to portray a quieter, less hostile soundscape. 
Presence of enjambment / run-on lines 
Examples from each poemLines 1-4 Lines 9-11Lines 7-10
‘Emigree’ opens with a rush of enjambed lines, as if the persona is both eager and hurried in her speech. In the second stanza, enjambment shows up again to reflect the ‘sloping’, ‘rolling’ and ‘rising’ actions alluded to from lines 9-11, overlaying syntactic movement and kinaesthetic references. The only section that contains substantial run-on lines in ‘Storm’ (l.7-10) relays the persona’s imagined fear of natural forces. This contrasts against the choppier phrases and lines in the rest of the poem, which describe the reality of nature (more indifferent than threatening). 
Varied lineation at points, not visually aligned
Examples from each poemWavy curve of the stanzas (especially stanza 2) Waviness of the stanzaic shape becomes more consistent after line 7 (the protruding line) 
There are 3 stanzas, with the first two being octaves and the final one containing an extra line. Lineation is visually varied, as the line lengths modulate to present a wavy shape throughout the stanzas (especially apparent in the first two stanzas). The entire poem is one chunky stanza, with line 7 jutting out (only visually though, metrically it contains 10 syllables like the rest of the poem). Perhaps the protrusion here visually mirrors the ‘excess’ of our overthinking minds, especially as it pertains to the persona’s unfounded anxiety about nature’s threat. 

Main idea 1: Preserving the home against external dangers  

  • In ‘The Emigree’, the persona fights back against her political persecutors by preserving a pure memory of her home city
  • In ‘Storm’, the persona braces himself for a potentially devastating storm by fortifying the structures of his home
  • Techniques used: war and natural imagery

Main idea 2: Reality vs expectation / ideal

  • In ‘The Emigree’, the persona would ideally like to return to her city, but it is implied that those in power back home do not welcome her presence.
  • In ‘Storm’, the persona anticipates a threatening storm, but ultimately realises that it’s much less destructive than he had expected it to be.
  • Techniques used: alliteration (plosives vs sibilants) 

Main idea 3: The turbulent nature of life 

  • In ‘The Emigree’, the persona is unmoored from her roots, and as an exile, she constantly struggles with conflicted emotions about wanting to return and yet knowing that she probably can never do so.
  • In ‘Storm’, nature is seen to be a turbulent force that changes in ways humans can’t quite anticipate.
  • Techniques used: enjambment and varied lineation 

Both ‘The Emigree’ and ‘Storm on an Island’ present the individual in the face of external dangers, whether real or imagined. However, while Rumens’ persona faces the threat of political persecution, and chooses to counter it by preserving a purer memory of her home, Heaney’s persona over-calculates the dangers of the storm, and eventually discovers that his fear of nature is largely unjustified. 

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Comparing Two Poems Essay Example

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Poetry is a unique art form as it usually captures the feelings of a particular individual. Therefore, two poems with the same genre and similar themes can have substantial differences. On the other hand, verses that seem different can share striking resemblances. To compare and contrast two poems, this essay example will focus on the message they carry.

“The Negro Speaks of Rivers” is a poem written by Langston Hughes during the Harlem Renaissance. It was 1921, and the young Hughes was just adding his voice to the plight of the African Americans at the time. “We Wear the Mask” is a piece by the famous author and activist Laurence Dunbar. The lyrical poem was written twenty-five years before Hughes published “The Negro Speaks of Rivers.” By comparing two poems, this essay example will reveal both their similarities and differences.

These two poems were written in the period between the Civil War and the Civil Rights Movement. This period was characterized by deep emotions concerning the struggles of the African Americans. Each of these poems represents the poets’ feelings towards the struggles of the African Americans. “The Negro Speaks of Rivers” chronicles the speaker’s historical journey from Africa to the West. The speaker refers to African Americans, their history, and their heritage.

The poem captures this rich heritage albeit in a nostalgic manner. On the other hand, “We Wear the Mask” is a poem by one of the first African American writers to be accorded a national accolade for his work. Dunbar explores the coping mechanisms of the African Americans during their struggles. Both poems address issues that happen in the same period.

Dunbar’s poem was published at the turn of the century shortly after slavery was outlawed. This period was expected to be a victorious time for African Americans and everyone assumed that they were happy. “We Wear the Mask” disputes this idea and presents an argument that happiness among the African American population was a façade.

According to Dunbar, deep inside, African Americans have ‘torn and bleeding hearts’. The message in this poem is not direct and it is in line with the situation in the ground. When this poem was written, the fight for equal rights among African Americans had not started in earnest. Instead, the struggle for equal rights was just bubbling under the surface.

Dunbar’s poem hints at this discontent by claiming that African Americans were just masking their feelings. Dunbar digs deeper into the issue by claiming that most of the population at the time was hiding behind religion to avoid confronting the issues of inequality. In addition, the speaker accuses the African American population of misleading the rest of the population about their actual feelings.

Langston Hughes’ poem has a more melancholic tone. Hughes wrote “The Negro Speaks of Rivers” twenty-five years after Dunbar’s poem was written. Hughes’ poem uses a different approach to address the African American issues of the time. His poem highlights the pride of origin that African Americans have.

The speaker in this poem speaks proudly about his rich history and heritage and how it is closely connected to some mighty rivers around the world. Unlike Dunbar, Hughes does not hide the message of his poem. This is mostly because there was no need for indirect messages after the Civil Rights Movement had already taken shape. Hughes took time out of the equal rights struggles of the African Americans to reflect on this population’s prolific heritage.

By doing this, the poet was alluding to the fact that the Civil Rights Movement was a small hurdle for the population that had come so far. The message in Hughes’ poem is structurally different from that in Dunbar’s poem. Hughes is reassuring African Americans of their supremacy and the need to hold on to their mighty heritage while Dunbar is indirectly urging African Americans to do something about their veiled unhappiness.

The mask that Dunbar talks about hides a prolific history and heritage about the African Americans. On the other hand, Hughes reiterates the need for African Americans to hold on to their rich heritage. Hughes’ poem is also meant to remind the world that African Americans have contributed towards major civilizations around the world. For instance, the speaker reminds the readers that African Americans were part of the civilization that brought the pyramids.

Hughes’ point is that African Americans thrived through various civilizations around the world and the Civil Rights Movement is just another hurdle. The rest of the population at the time viewed the African American population as the recently freed slaves who were supposed to show gratitude. However, most people failed to put into consideration the fact that African Americans’ history predated slavery.

Dunbar’s poem is also structured in a manner that addresses African Americans and the rest of the population. Dunbar sends a call to action to African Americans although his message is not direct. On the other hand, Dunbar’s poem informs the rest of the population that the happiness they see among the African American population is not real. While Hughes’ message is assertive and direct, Dunbar’s message is provocative and indirect.

One of the most striking similarities between these two poems is the fact that they use a central metaphor. Hughes’ poem uses the River as the main metaphor. In addition, he includes it in the poem’s title. The river is used to show the passage of time in “The Negro Speaks of Rivers”. African Americans have come a long way and triumphed over several forms of adversity. However, just like rivers flow eternally, African Americans have kept on flowing.

The metaphor of the river is also used to show that the existence of African Americans will outlast many things. At one point in the poem, the speaker says that he has seen rivers change their appearance depending on the time. This signifies that a time will come when the outlook of African Americans will be favorable. Dunbar’s poem uses the mask as the main metaphor.

The poet also boldly introduces this metaphor in the poem’s first line. The mask refers to the façade that prevents people from seeing the discontent of the African American population. According to Dunbar, African Americans use masks to hide their actual feelings and avoid provoking those who oppress them. The mask is a strong metaphor that also lends itself to the poem’s title. Use of metaphors gives these two poems a valuable outlook and helps the poets pass their strong messages to their audience.

“The Negro Speaks of Rivers” and “We Wear the Mask” are two poems that address the plight of the African Americans albeit from different perspectives. The wishes of the two poets materialized with the success of the Civil Rights Movement. Both poets reckon that the struggle of African Americans is an ongoing process.

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How To Write A Poetry Comparison Essay

How To Write A Poetry Comparison Essay

An essay comparing two poems needs to be written with an understanding of how themes, structure, forms, language, and style distinguish the two poems. It is also important to consider how the themes, structure, forms, language, and style interact with each other to create meaning and richness. Even if the poems are similar in some ways, the differences must be discussed to identify the unique qualities of the individual poems. This essay will examine the similarities and differences between two poems, “The Road Not Taken” by Robert Frost and “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” by Robert Frost.

The two poems are similar in theme in that they both explore the concept of making decisions and taking different paths or routes. The speaker of both poems is at a crossroads in life and has to make a decision which will form his personal history and future. In “The Road Not Taken”, the speaker is presented with two roads and he is uncertain which one to take. In “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening”, the speaker is presented with the same dilemma, but instead of a physical road, he is face with an opportunity to stay and enjoy the beauty of nature versus leaving and returning to reality. Both speakers make a conscious effort to make a personal decision and break free from indecision.

When discussing the structure and form of the poems, it must be noted that both poems have a simple, regular meter. The meter of “The Road Not Taken” is iambic tetrameter and the meter of “Stopping by Woods” is iambic trimeter. The rhyme scheme of both poems is also similar and is made up of couplets. Both poems also use enjambment throughout, which creates a sense of incompleteness and gives the poems an unfinished feel. This technique is used to signify the struggle of the speaker with making decisions and his anguish in not knowing what to choose.

How To Write A Poetry Comparison Essay

The language used in both poems is also similar in that both authors use words of caution and alertness to emphasize the importance of making the right decision. In “The Road Not Taken”, the word “doubt” is used to highlight the consequence of indecision and in “Stopping by Woods”, words such as “promise” and “duty” are used to emphasize the difficulty of the decision-making process. Both poems also contain extended metaphors to illustrate the concept of making a choice. In “The Road Not Taken”, the road is a metaphor for life’s journey and the journey of the individual, whereas in “Stopping by Woods”, the woods represent a momentary escape from reality.

Style of the Poems

The style of both poems differs significantly. “The Road Not Taken” is written in the traditional and formal style of a typical Romantic poem. It uses many of the conventions of the Romantic period, such as references to nature, melancholy, and the use of sonnets and iambic pentameter. On the other hand, “Stopping by Woods” is written in a more modern and conversational style. It is less complex than other Romantic works and its language is very direct and simple. The lack of complexity in the poem, as well as the combination of simple language and the casual tone of voice, create a relaxed, open atmosphere. This is in stark contrast to the complexity and formality of “The Road Not Taken”.

Analysis of the Poems

The main theme of both poems is decision-making; however, each poem takes a slightly different approach to the subject matter. “The Road Not Taken” is more reflective and emphasizes the importance of making the “right” decision. The poem suggests that it is better to make the more difficult decision, rather than the simpler, easier choice. “Stopping by Woods” on the other hand, is more balanced and suggests that it is possible to find a balance between making the easier choice and taking the path less traveled. The poem suggests that it is possible to make an informed decision while still allowing oneself to be open to new experiences and opportunities.

Context of the Poems

The contexts in which both poems were written must also be taken into consideration. “The Road Not Taken” was written post-World War I, during a period of social change, transition, and uncertainty. The poem explores the idea of taking the path less traveled and suggests that being able to fully comprehend the consequences of one’s choices is impossible. “Stopping by Woods” was written during the Great Depression and its overarching theme is that of a sense of calm and peace in the midst of a chaotic world. The poem emphasizes that it is possible to accept the realities of life while realizing it is possible to find moments of respite and reprieve.

How To Write A Poetry Comparison Essay

In conclusion, when comparing two poems it is important to take into account the similarities and differences in their themes, structure, forms, language, and style. Both “The Road Not Taken” and “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” explore the concept of making decisions and taking different paths or routes. However, each poem takes a slightly different approach to the subject. “The Road Not Taken” is more reflective and emphasizes the importance of making the “right” decision whereas “Stopping by Woods” is more balanced and suggests that it is possible to find a balance between making a simpler choice and taking the path less traveled. It is also important to consider the context in which each poem was written as this can give insights into the message the author was trying to convey.

Theme & Symbols

The poem’s theme and symbols are two areas of the poem that need to be analyzed. When it comes to “The Road Not Taken” the theme of choosing can be seen all throughout. The speaker is presented with two roads and he is pressured to make a decision that will affect his future. The poem also uses symbols such as the two roads and the two paths to represent the decisions that the speaker faces and the options that he can choose from. The two roads, can both represent the same decision, but could also represent the consequences of the choices he has made. The poem also uses imagery, such as the yellow woods, to give a vivid idea of the path that has been taken.

In “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening”, the theme explored is that of mortality and change. The speaker of the poem is searching for solace and peace, but also for something that can weather the storms of life. The symbols in the poem represent the transience of things in life, such as the snow and the frozen lake, which are both in a constant state of change. The poem also uses images such as the farmer’s house in the village, to represent hope and the promise of a better future, away from the secluded and still woods.

Examining the Messages

The messages in the two poems are closely related, but also have some differences. In “The Road Not Taken”, the message is that of taking responsibility for one’s choices and realizing that life is a series of decisions. The poem suggests that not taking a path and remaining in limbo, is not beneficial to the individual in the end. In “Stopping by Woods”, the message is that of taking a pause, or a momentary break, to appreciate and enjoy the wonders of nature. The poem suggests that it is indeed possible to find a balance between making choices, taking risks, and being open to new experiences.

Message of the Poems to the Reader

How To Write A Poetry Comparison Essay

The message of both poems is one of self-reflection and the need to take responsibility for one’s own choices and actions. “The Road Not Taken” emphasizes the importance of taking difficult and challenging paths, rather than the easier choice. The poem also reinforces the idea that life is a series of choices, and that’s why it is necessary to have the courage to make a choice and own the consequences of one’s decision. On the other hand, “Stopping by Woods” is about seeking solace, and realizing that it is okay to take a break and to appreciate the beauty of nature and its solitude. The poem also suggests that it is possible to make an informed decision while still allowing one to be open to new experiences.

Writing a Poetry Comparison Essay

When writing a poetry comparison essay, it is important to consider the structure and form, language, and style of each poem. It is also essential to understand the context in which each poem was written and the messages being conveyed. Every poem has its own unique set of qualities, which needs to be discussed in order to create a thorough, meaningful analysis.

When writing a comparison essay, it is important to remember the key aspects that need to be discussed. The structure, form, and language of both poems must be examined and compared. Examining the themes, symbols, and messages of each poem is also essential. Finally, when comparing two poems, the context and style of each poem should also be taken into account.

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How to Write an Essay Comparing Poems

This is Revision World’s guide on how to write an essay or answer an exam question that asks you to compare poems within the poetry anthology you are studying.

Understanding the Task:

Identify the Key Components: Ensure you understand the task requirements, including the poems you're comparing, the themes, and the aspects you need to analyse (e.g., structure, language, tone).

Pre-Writing Stage:

Read and Annotate: Read the poems multiple times, annotating key themes, literary devices, and interesting observations.

Identify Similarities and Differences: Note down similarities and differences in themes, imagery, language, structure, and tone between the two poems.

Structuring Your Essay:

 Introduction:

Introduce the poems and poets, providing context if necessary.

Present your thesis statement, outlining the main points of comparison.

Body Paragraphs:

Topic Sentences: Start each paragraph with a clear topic sentence that states the aspect of comparison.

Comparison: Analyse each poem separately, focusing on the chosen aspect (e.g., theme, structure). Then, compare and contrast the same aspect in both poems.

Use of Evidence: Provide evidence from the poems to support your analysis (quotations).

Analysis: Interpret the significance of the similarities and differences, considering their effects on the reader and the overall meaning of the poems.

Conclusion:

Summarise your main points of comparison.

Reflect on the significance of the comparisons and their implications for the reader.

Offer insights into the broader themes or messages conveyed by the poems.

Writing Tips:

Be Specific: Avoid vague statements and ensure your comparisons are specific and well-supported by evidence.

Consider Poetic Devices: Analyse the poets' use of poetic devices (e.g., imagery, symbolism, metaphor) and how they contribute to the overall effect of the poems.

Focus on Key Themes: Choose a few key themes or aspects to compare rather than attempting to cover everything in the poems.

Maintain Coherence: Ensure your essay flows logically, with clear transitions between paragraphs and ideas.

Proofread: Carefully proofread your essay for grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.

Example Statement:

"In 'Poem A' and 'Poem B,' both poets utilise imagery and symbolism to explore the theme of loss, but while 'Poem A' uses natural imagery to convey a sense of grief and acceptance, 'Poem B' employs religious symbolism to depict a more existential struggle with loss and faith."

Example Topic Sentences:

"In 'Poem A,' the poet employs vivid natural imagery to convey the speaker's emotional response to loss."

"Conversely, 'Poem B' utilises religious symbolism to explore the theme of loss in a more abstract and existential manner."

By following these steps and incorporating these tips, you can effectively write a well-structured and insightful essay comparing two poems in your GCSE English Literature exam.

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