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Use of Sensory Language | The essay includes vivid and detailed sensory language that effectively appeals to the reader’s senses. | The essay includes some sensory language that appeals to the reader’s senses, but could be more detailed and vivid. | The essay includes limited sensory language that does not effectively appeal to the reader’s senses. | The essay lacks sensory language. |
Organization | The essay is well-organized with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion that flow smoothly. | The essay is mostly organized with an introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, but may have some areas that lack clarity or flow. | The essay is somewhat organized, but lacks a clear introduction, body paragraphs, or conclusion, causing confusion for the reader. | The essay is disorganized and lacks a clear structure. |
Descriptive Details | The essay includes a variety of specific and detailed descriptive details that effectively paint a picture of the gingerbread house. | The essay includes some descriptive details, but could be more specific and detailed in painting a picture of the gingerbread house. | The essay includes limited descriptive details that do not effectively paint a picture of the gingerbread house. | The essay lacks descriptive details. |
Grammar and Spelling | The essay demonstrates excellent grammar and spelling with very few errors. | The essay demonstrates mostly correct grammar and spelling, with occasional errors that do not significantly impact understanding. | The essay demonstrates some errors in grammar and spelling that occasionally impact understanding. | The essay demonstrates numerous errors in grammar and spelling that significantly impact understanding. |
Word Choice | The essay includes a variety of precise and engaging vocabulary choices that enhance the descriptive nature of the writing. | The essay includes some precise and engaging vocabulary choices, but could benefit from more variety and impact. | The essay includes limited vocabulary choices that do not enhance the descriptive nature of the writing. | The essay lacks precise and engaging vocabulary choices. |
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Writing Across the Curriculum
Faculty and instructors tend to be divided over the use of rubrics and scoring sheets to assess writing. Some instructors appreciate the sense of consistency that rubrics provide and how they simplify grading. Others find scoring rubrics artificial and confining, and worry that splitting hairs between categories increases assessment challenges. In this blog post, we’ll look at the question of scoring rubrics from the perspective of student performance and recent research on how scoring rubrics can help students learn.
Many instructors are aware of the broad distinctions among rubrics. The popular education blog Cult of Pedagogy offers a practical refresher on the differences between holistic, analytic, and single-point rubrics . Regardless of the final form, the most important features of rubrics are the descriptions of salient features of successful completion. Bookhart and Chen (2015) noted that successful rubrics provided descriptive features of expected performance levels in their meta-analysis of student-facing rubrics. Grading sheets that merely provided numerical scales or offered points for meeting format and assignment requirements were not associated with student performance gains. The following examples illustrate the differences:
Perhaps not surprisingly, rubrics that offer clear performance standards are associated with greater consistency between graders and greater validity in assessment. More importantly, Bookhart and Chen observed that when students were offered the same assignment and rated on the same scale, students provided with a descriptive rubric performed better than their counterparts who wrote without the benefit of descriptive criteria.
While the benefits of descriptive criteria were evident in students' task performance in summative assessments, descriptive criteria were also positively correlated to student motivation and self-efficacy while engaged in the writing process. Providing students with descriptions of successful performance can help them internalize those standards and recognize their presence when assessing work in progress. In their analysis of pre-service teachers, Panadero and Romero (2014) found that the availability of a descriptive rubric increased students' use of effective learning strategies (planning and drafting), positive self-regulation, and reported self-efficacy.
When coupled with practices of effective peer response and using reflective memos , the descriptive language used in effective rubrics can clarify assignment aims and goals and improve the quality and specificity of students' feedback on works in progress.
Introduce students to assessment criteria common to your discipline. The Writing Enriched Curriculum Program website includes descriptions of faculty-generated writing abilities and menus of grading criteria used by WEC units. The academic units page links to web descriptions of these criteria that can be a practical starting point for discussion of assessment.
Ask students to perform a criterion reference assessment of samples. Using a de-identified sample or samples, ask students (individually or in teams) to use the scoring rubric to rate the quality of a written document and justify their reasoning. Using google forms or another shared platform, compare student responses and identify points of difference.
Involve students in generating descriptive language around standards. Rather than beginning with a rubric to assess samples, ask students to read or review examples of successful writing and describe what they notice. What features make a selection engaging, informative, or persuasive? What qualities make it less informative, less clear, or less relevant? Students' experience as readers and writers gives them a descriptive vocabulary to augment or supplement criteria common to the field.
Susan M. Bookhart & Fei Chen (2015). The quality and effectiveness of descriptive rubrics. Educational Review , 67:3, 343–368, http://dx.doi.org/10.1080/00131911.2014.929565
Jennifer Gonzales (2014). Know your terms: Holistic, Analytic, and Single-Point Rubrics. Cult of Pedagogy. https://www.cultofpedagogy.com/holistic-analytic-single-point-rubrics/
Ernesto Panadero & Margarida Romero (2014). To rubric or not to rubric? The effects of self-assessment on self-regulation, performance, and self-efficacy, Assessment in Education: Principles, Policy & Practic e , 21:2, 133-148, DOI: 10.1080/0969594X.2013.877872
Are you interested in discussing ways to develop or refine your courses and assignments? Members of the Writing Across the Curriculum Team can meet with you in person or through Zoom to discuss questions, problems, and strategies to make teaching with writing more manageable and better.
In addition to the links above, our Teaching with Writing Program website offers teaching resources to faculty members and instructors across the University of Minnesota system.
Each semester, we host the popular Teaching with Writing event series , offering workshops, panels, and discussions on writing-related topics. This semester, we’re focusing on connections between reading, research, and writing.
Visit the Writing Across the Curriculum Program and follow us on Twitter @UMNWriting. You can schedule a phone, email, in-person, or via zoom through our online consultation form .
Example 3: Professors of writing-enhanced courses may use a rubric similar to this to describe the work that would earn a specific letter grade.
In general, A writing is characterized by absolute clarity and original thought. No essay earns an A if it is not outstanding, academically challenging, and excellent. As are NOT for working hard; rather, As are awarded for rich and full detail, adroit transitions and effective arrangement, ethical and broad research, successful and vivid development and use of the individual voice, and quality of thought, expressed in high quality prose.
In general, B writing is characterized by above average achievement. An essay earning a B is one that demonstrates most of the qualities of average writing, illuminated in some spots by evidence of excellence: for instance, while organization may be sound throughout the essay, a superb introduction and conclusion might reflect "above average" skill in this area. Few mechanical errors are present. A B essay is often considered a C essay with some extra "good stuff"--style, voice, humor, and so on.
In general, C writing is average and expected writing. The essay has no particular lacks or weaknesses, but neither does it demonstrate excellence. Organization is coherent if slightly inconsistent, use of evidence is often limited to one or two kinds, and the essay sounds somewhat anonymous. Mechanical errors are present but not intrusive. A C designates average achievement.
In general, D writing falls below the average mark in two ways: meeting the assignment and mechanical proficiency. Writing that is off topic, doesn't address the assignment, or ignores one or more elements of the assignment is below average; mechanical errors that interfere with the reading process are clearly below average. Incomplete essays, or essays that do not get revised, are often D level essays that could be raised to C essays with substantial work.
In general, F writing fails to meet the assignment, fails to show effort at passing the course, fails the ethical expectations or in some other irreparable way falls far, far short of being acceptable work
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Descriptive Essay Rubric CATEGORY 4 3 2 1 Title Title is creative, sparks interest and is related to the topic. Title is related to the topic but needs to be more creative. Title is present. No title present. Introduction (Organization) The introduction is inviting, states the main topic, previews the structure of the paper,
1. Have I used descriptive words and details to create strong mental pictures? 2. Have I used appropriate transition words? 3. Have I used suitable figurative language to develop sensory images? 4. Is the purpose of my descriptive writing stated in my topic sentence? 5. Have I developed the topic in an interesting and informative way?
Analytic/Descriptive Rubric. An analytic or descriptive rubric often takes the form of a table with the criteria listed in the left column and with levels of performance listed across the top row. Each cell contains a description of what the specified criterion looks like at a given level of performance. ... "Rubric for persuasive essay at ...
Descriptive Writing Rubric. Vivid details incorporated throughout. Sensory details create rich imagery that complements the mood of the narrative. Concrete details and sensory imagery adequately support the description and narrative. Limited presence of concrete details. These do not necessarily contribute to creation of a mood.
Sentences lack structure and appear incomplete or rambling. Grammar, Spelling, Capitalization, & Punctuation. There are no errors in grammar, spelling, capitalization, or punctuation. Rubric is attached to essay. Essay is completed on time. There are some errors; however, these errors do not distract the reader. Rubric is attached to essay.
Descriptive essay example. An example of a short descriptive essay, written in response to the prompt "Describe a place you love to spend time in," is shown below. Hover over different parts of the text to see how a descriptive essay works. Descriptive essay example. On Sunday afternoons I like to spend my time in the garden behind my house.
1. Define Clear Criteria. Identify specific aspects of writing to evaluate. Be clear and precise. The criteria should reflect the key components of the writing task. For example, for a narrative essay, criteria might include plot development, character depth, and use of descriptive language.
Essay Rubric Directions: Your essay will be graded based on this rubric. Consequently, use this rubric as a guide when writing your essay and check it again before you submit your essay. Traits 4 3 2 1 Focus & Details There is one clear, well-focused topic. Main ideas are clear and are well supported by detailed and accurate information.
- Descriptive details are concrete, specific, and sensory. - Writing demonstrates a confident voice. ___ - Words are properly chosen. - Sentences are adequately constructed and logically ordered. 2 Emerging - Most descriptive details are concrete and sensory, but writer could be more specific. - Writer relies too much on
Rubric for Descriptive Paragraph Writing (grades 6-8) The topic sentence is the first sentence in the paragraph. It is a clear statement of the paragraph content. The topic sentence gives some clarity of the overall connectivity of the sentences present. The topic sentence gives little evidence of a relevant topic connecting to the other sentences.
Rubric - Language Arts Grade 6 Descriptive. Criteria. 4 Points. 3 Points. 2 Points. 1 Point. Use of Sensory Language. The essay includes vivid and detailed sensory language that effectively appeals to the reader's senses. The essay includes some sensory language that appeals to the reader's senses, but could be more detailed and vivid.
Rubrics 2.0: Descriptive Criteria Enable Student Success. Faculty and instructors tend to be divided over the use of rubrics and scoring sheets to assess writing. Some instructors appreciate the sense of consistency that rubrics provide and how they simplify grading. Others find scoring rubrics artificial and confining, and worry that splitting ...
This document provides a rubric for evaluating descriptive essays. It outlines 14 categories for assessment including title, introduction, focus on topic, supporting details, adding personality, sentence structure, sequencing, conclusion, grammar and spelling, revision, form and neatness. For each category, performance levels of 4, 3, 2 and 1 are defined with clear descriptions of the ...
General Descriptive Rubric. Example 3: Professors of writing-enhanced courses may use a rubric similar to this to describe the work that would earn a specific letter grade. In general, A writing is characterized by absolute clarity and original thought. No essay earns an A if it is not outstanding, academically challenging, and excellent.
The descriptive essay rubric outlines categories for evaluating descriptive essays. It provides descriptors for 4 levels of performance in each category, which include the introduction, focus on topic, supporting information/details, adding personality, sentence structure, sequencing, conclusion, grammar/spelling, revision, and form/neatness. The highest level of performance in each category ...
This packet contains rubrics for descriptive essay assignments. The packet contains several variations of my standard descriptive essay rubric, which makes them of use to classrooms in all subject areas and several grade levels, including post-secondary. The rubric variations can be used in Grades 6-8, Grades 9-12, Higher Education, and in ...
Descriptive Essay Rubric - Free download as Word Doc (.doc / .docx), PDF File (.pdf), Text File (.txt) or read online for free. The rubric outlines criteria for evaluating essays across multiple categories, including: - An introduction that clearly states the subject and includes a thesis statement. - Use of sensory details that appeal to the ...
The document provides a rubric for grading a descriptive writing assignment (MWA 1) with categories for ideas, organization, introduction, conclusion, word choice, sensory detail, figurative language, sentence fluency, conventions, and formatting. Each category is graded on a scale of 1 to 5, with descriptors provided for what constitutes an excellent (5), very good (4), satisfactory (3), or ...
Looking for something to lead your students through writing a DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH or essay? This resource includes a detailed assignment sheet, brainstorming sheet, peer editing / self-evaluation sheet, Helpful Hints handout, detailed grading rubric and more! It also includes two example descriptive paragraphs / mentor texts for students to see the difference between a poorly written and a ...
Analytic scoring is usually based on a scale of 0-100 with each aspect receiving a portion of the total points. The General Rubric for Analytic Evaluationon page 14 can be used to score a piece of writing in this way as can the rubrics for specific writing types on pages 17, 26, 31, 36-38, and 43.
The document is a rubric for grading descriptive essays. It evaluates essays across 5 categories: thesis and focus, organization and development, rhetorical skill and language, mechanics, and an overall holistic grade. For each category, it provides descriptors to assess excellent, competent, adequate, and developing/weak essays with criteria like clear thesis, logical organization, vivid ...
Holistic scoring is a quick method of evaluating a composition based on the reader's general impression of the overall quality of the writing—you can generally read a student's composition and assign a score to it in two or three minutes. Holistic scoring is usually based on a scale of 0-4, 0-5, or 0-6.
This rubric evaluates descriptive essays based on several criteria, including the introduction, use of sensory details, word choice, use of figurative language, sentence structure, and grammar. For each criterion, the rubric assigns a score from 1 to 4, with 4 being the highest. A score of 4 indicates the essay's introduction clearly states the subject and captures attention, it includes ...